tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182112158278150945.post2107443788198249437..comments2023-10-31T05:09:07.606-07:00Comments on .: Middle's Untitled Fiction - Now Taking SuggestionsDebra Kayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13455047894767524091noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182112158278150945.post-152148661652923532009-10-19T13:21:27.450-07:002009-10-19T13:21:27.450-07:00Middle,
I've been following this story along ...Middle,<br /><br />I've been following this story along and have been waiting for the next instalment. Does the wedding actually happen? Keep on..Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00607220451457829777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182112158278150945.post-33900469964829945102009-10-12T04:48:50.375-07:002009-10-12T04:48:50.375-07:00Ps I'm not typing well on my new iPhone. I mea...Ps I'm not typing well on my new iPhone. I meant to say I am intrigued by the narrator! More please because I'm hooked!<br />Xoxokjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182112158278150945.post-79922220707005852862009-10-12T04:46:18.562-07:002009-10-12T04:46:18.562-07:00Middle-- this is intriguing. Who is the narrator?
...Middle-- this is intriguing. Who is the narrator?<br />The ending leaves so much unsaid. I'm waiting for the next instaalment!kjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182112158278150945.post-79852166172948042662009-10-11T07:54:07.859-07:002009-10-11T07:54:07.859-07:00I like the way you begin with just two characters,...I like the way you begin with just two characters, letting us get a picture of them in our heads, before moving on to the larger screen so to speak of the wedding (I assume that's next anywya). I also like the way the two characters are contrasted and made special by their differences. Keep writing!sukipoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09351851210507048174noreply@blogger.com